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Proposal: Global Serious Errors of Design and Environmental , Green Standard of the World Contest: Consumption of Products & Services 2014 Thank you for your contest entry. We appreciate your willingness to share your ideas and also the time and effort you put into developing a proposal and submitting it to the contest. We have reviewed your proposal and found that it contained intriguing elements; however, have chosen not to advance it to the next round of competition. We encourage you to keep developing your idea. Transfer your proposal to a Workspace to re-open it, make edits, add collaborators, and even submit it into a future contest. You can do so by logging into your account, opening your proposal, selecting the Admin tab, and clicking "Move proposal". We welcome you to stay involved in the Climate CoLab community: support and comment on proposals that have been named Finalists, and vote during the public voting period to help select the contest’s Popular Choice Winner. Climate CoLab will be opening more contests throughout the year and you are welcome to submit your proposal to those contests as well. Keep up the great work. We hope that by working together, we all can create solutions that wouldn't otherwise be possible. Sincerely, Contest Fellows If there are additional comments from the Judges & Fellows, they will be included below.
Your proposal seems to have an important message, but the presentation could be much improved. Most importantly, the information presented should be reduced to the essentials and the message of the proposal should be made clear in the first few paragraphs.
It is very hard to read this proposal, especially with the fonts used in the pictures.
Evidently, a lot of effort has been put into this proposal, and it points out some very important problems. However, it also doesn't address some key aspects, such as how to get governments to implement the plans in this proposal. As an idea, maybe this proposal could be worked out together with an NGO?
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