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Proposal: The Sustenance Project: Fostering Community Collaboration by Breaking Down Silos Contest: Fostering Climate Collaboration in Boulder, CO 2016 Thank you for your contest entry. Thank you for your contest entry. We appreciate your willingness to share your ideas and also the time and effort you put into developing a proposal and submitting it to the contest. We have reviewed your proposal and found that it contained intriguing elements; however, have chosen not to advance it to the next round of competition. We encourage you to keep developing your idea. Transfer your proposal to a Workspace to re-open it, make edits, add collaborators, and even submit it into a future contest. You can do so by logging into your account, opening your proposal, selecting the Admin tab, and clicking “Move proposal.” We welcome you to stay involved in the Climate CoLab community: support and comment on proposals that have been named Finalists, and vote during the public voting period to help select the contest’s Popular Choice Winner. Climate CoLab will be opening more contests throughout the year and you are welcome to submit your proposal to those contests as well. Keep up the great work. We hope that by working together, we all can create solutions that wouldn’t otherwise be possible. Sincerely, Contest Fellows If there are additional comments from the Judges & Fellows, they will be included below.
This proposal seems under-researched and unclear about how it will all be achieved. Also, the submittee didn't seem to respond to the Judges' requests.
Emphasis on systems-thinking is strong and the goal of connecting people and fostering collaboration is a good one.
Additional focus on the goals and implementation are needed.
How would participation be promoted and encouraged?
Further detail the project methodology and add references and links to resources for background. Substantiate any claims with evidence.
Proofread the grammar throughout the piece.
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