Climaure - Augmented spaces to encourage sustainable behaviours. by Miksham L, Rudrani S
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Impressive improvements in this proposal. Basic concept of making an immersive experience, is a strong approach. I like the mephassi on pop up spaces in locations that are already popular. Focus on envisioning solutions, and not just problems like sea level rise, which can get tired, can be not that interesting and emotionally overwhelming. The budget for these augmented spaces seems very cheap, but perhaps the point of these is that they are low-cost, making them more feasible for various locations. However, in order for this effort to have a meaningful impact, it would have to be adopted on a much larger scale.
This application would benefit from substantial revision of the text, which could be strengthened and clarified. It would be great to include visuals. I would suggest considering the use of climate solutions and positive outcomes as well as negative outcomes in the AR projections. Finally, the execution plan is thin. Noting these significant areas where I see room for improvement, the essential idea of an accessible, attractive, social, immersive experience with a call to action emerging out of the material, located in high foot-traffic hubs, is highly compelling and to my mind deserves further consideration.
Nov 6, 2017
Thank you for believing in our idea, and providing valuable insights. As per your suggestions, we have revised the proposal thoroughly and incorporated improvements.
Revision of text - In order to make our idea more comprehensible, we strengthened the text which is supported by visual content and narratives.
We have reworked on the execution plan of the project and provided a precise outlook to the same, with detailing of our installation, it's working, the strategy of mass scaling, and a concise picture of the projection content.
We have also considered adding AR content for climate solutions, through an interactive and gamified experience, providing participants to take climate-friendly decisions in their daily life.
Here are Sub-topics to which we have edited changes -
2. What actions do you propose?
3. Where will these actions be taken?
4. What impact will these actions have on greenhouse gas emissions and/or adapting to climate change?